Excellent work again. A very well written article that uses mode of address and quotes effectively. Your work is mostly very well structured with excellent use of language. Again look at the final paragraph, it might be better to finish on the note about Justin trying to be a better person. Writing - D-
The layout is good and you are using a range of skills in photoshop and indesign. M Make sure your text columns are justified When text wrapping make sure there is some margin space around the picture Also try and create a more catchy headline - possibly use the text you have in the pull quote box and add a quote in it's place. Great work Chloe - keep it up!
EastEnders: again good work, but try not to just list what happens in the show. Your headline needs to link to the show so that the reader knows what the article is about eg: "Is this the end for Bianca?"
Also make sure the picture is a bit bigger and clearly shows it is about Eastenders. M-
Excellent work again. A very well written article that uses mode of address and quotes effectively.
ReplyDeleteYour work is mostly very well structured with excellent use of language. Again look at the final paragraph, it might be better to finish on the note about Justin trying to be a better person.
Writing - D-
The layout is good and you are using a range of skills in photoshop and indesign.
M
Make sure your text columns are justified
When text wrapping make sure there is some margin
space around the picture
Also try and create a more catchy headline - possibly use the text you have in the pull quote box and add a quote in it's place.
Great work Chloe - keep it up!
EastEnders: again good work, but try not to just list what happens in the show. Your headline needs to link to the show so that the reader knows what the article is about eg: "Is this the end for Bianca?"
ReplyDeleteAlso make sure the picture is a bit bigger and clearly shows it is about Eastenders.
M-