Rise or shine

Rise or fall

Int. living room. Day.

Rebecca: ext living room

Katy: gets up and follows Rebecca

Rebecca/Katy: ignores Lauren and and walks away

Katy: try’s to persuade Lauren to come with them

Lauren: no way  am I  going to that brutal house in Jamaica its horrible

Rebecca/Katy: why not

Rebecca: just because mum died there it does not mean its horrible get over it now its not all of use.

Lauren: exactly I cant come because mum died and she was the only person I could talk to when I was pregnant.

Katy: “DON’T YOU DARE” talk about what happened to you with Jake he was Rebecca's boyfriend and she loved him.

Lauren: I get pregnant with his baby and he loved me and I loved him when he was with me it was real.

Rebecca: I loved him more then you like 100% more

After 10 seconds Katy and Lauren start to fight

Rebecca: STOP!! I am pregnant with his baby too so fight me not Katy she was just telling the truth.

Lauren: I have had enough madness there is no  way you are pregnant with him

Rebecca: fine don’t believe me

Lauren: leaves the house and smashed the door

Katy: I don’t feel like going on the trip without her I feel so scared and alone

Rebecca: you have your sister and me

Katy: what are we going to do now?

Rebecca: I will think of some thing

Katy: I have a big secret to tell you

Rebecca; what???

On my script work I inserted different speech language with in the three characters. Also I made sure that all the characters were different and had different characteristics. As well as these two things I also thought about how I could make the dilemmas stand out so i thought about what dilemmas I could use and then I picked one where they all had the same problem and then to make sure that this was successful I worked within the three characters to make sure that the story would not be confusing and so that everyone that saw this understood what exactly was going on within the story. To improve I should maybe add the person in the middle of this story so that it could be more clearer.